Short Story: The Unclaimed Girl

August 22, 2022
JD Kirk

Hey, look, it’s another free VIP Club short story!

As you might now have seen if you watched the VIP Club Welcome Video, I was a full-time children’s author under various names since around 2008, and only started writing for adults in 2016.

Several years ago, I was invited to write a short story for the Edinburgh International Book Festival on the theme of “Elsewhere”.

The story I came up with is called The Unclaimed Girl, and you can download a PDF, as well as an audio version narrated in my dulcet tones (complete with a pretty cringeworthy attempt at a woman’s voice that sounds like Robin Williams’ Mrs Doubtfire) using the links below.

Read the PDF Version
Listen to the Audio

I really love this story, and have been thinking about exploring the world it is set in in a new series of books. What do you think? Is that something you’d be interested in reading? Leave a comment below to let me know!

Best wishes,

JD

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10 Comments

  1. Jane

    Excellent, keep writing please.

    Not usually my thing but it captured my imagination.

  2. Sam

    Brilliant concept, very much looking forward to reading more!

  3. Jeanne

    I’m intrigued. More, please!

  4. Suzanne

    Dulcet tones or no, this was good. I would defo read more along these lines,

  5. Chris

    Very interesting. I enjoyed the read and look forward to more like this.

  6. Sue

    Oh yes ! This opens up so much scope for many adventures and theories from beyond the vail. Definitely a go’er .

  7. Jessie

    I was intrigued but not sure where you would take it. A supernatural thriller?

  8. J.R.

    I’m hooked and definitely want to know what happens next!!

  9. Rosemary

    yes please, need to know what happens next

  10. Chris

    Read this in the early days of “Space Team” and it stands the test of time well! Please don’t abandon Hoon and Logan by going in a new direction. Your fans of Space Team, The Bug, World Killer and a host of others are all waiting for follow-ups! You are in danger of becoming a “flibbertigibbet”. Keep up the good work Mr H!